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Place: Köhniö Jyväskylä - Finland

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Given 2014-01-10
Great atmosphere!

Secluded by m-eralp ( Suggested by little-billie and Featured by Anoya )
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You did really good with this photo by getting the lighting at just the right time of day with the fog still pretty thick. The colors are good though I might recommend increasing the saturation just a little to help the reds and oranges appear a little more. The other thing I might recommend when shooting a photo like this where the first thought might be to set the ISO really high and leave the shutter speed at around a normal range. Do the opposite set the ISO low and the exposure high it allows you to get more detail on the photo with the limited light and it greatly reduces the graininess of the photo. That being said I like the photo a lot it has a great depth of field and you really feel like your walking there at that time and that's one of the key signs of a well done photo. Keep up the good work :)
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First of all, this is a great shot! Well-composed, loads of lovely, subtle colours, and a well-created mood, suiting the mist.
It reminds me a bit of Nelleke, since she does a lot of forests in mist.
Composition wise, you've kept is simple, and effective. The track leading away is nicely positioned throughout the frame. Negative space wise, the dark tree on the right keeps the viewer in, and the brighter mist patch draws the viewer in. Well-composed shot!
Colours - good, subtle colours. You've kept a good contrast, between the crimson red, and the lighter blue, and this adds to the mood of the shot. You've also kept it subtle, but noticeable. This is good!
The mist clearly adds layers and depth to the image, leading the viewer into the frame.
One thing I like about this is the verticals that the trees provide. They seem to anchor the image, and provide some stability and grounding for the viewer. There are three noticeable ones in the foreground, adding grounding to the frame.

Technique - very good. Good clarity. Good colours. Good exposure level - slightly dark, but adds to the mood of the piece. A bit more foreground maybe would have added to the shot, but I wasn't there.... although by not using a foreground item, like a rock, it adds to the detachment and overall feel. The grounding is provided by the vertical trees, so a foreground item is not needed.
Focus point is clear, and well-led to. Good composition.


Impact - Very good. Good composition

Overall this is an outstanding shot. It has an excellent composition, fantastic technique, and great impact! Well done!! I can't really see much here that could have been improved!
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darkSoul4Life Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
That looks awesome. Good work.
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:iconm-eralp:
m-eralp Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015   Photographer
Thank you:)
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:iconbillynikoll:
BillyNikoll Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow...great!
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karynshafique Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
lovely Heart
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annaloveyou Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG OMG OMGLa la la la 
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:iconfloresarts:
FloresArts Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
So beautiful! 
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:iconm-eralp:
m-eralp Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014   Photographer
Thanks:)
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:iconanoya:
Anoya Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014   Photographer
I've featured your work here: APN Daily Deviations - January 2014! Heart
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:iconmentalalterness:
MentalAlterness Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Cidden Muhteşem ! Meow :3 
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:iconruasieunhan:
RuaSieuNhan Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
gorgeous
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:iconpcellis:
pcellis Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Very beautiful work !!
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AidaroseC Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
i really do love this photo in this color
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:icontophxomi:
tophxomi Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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:iconm-eralp:
m-eralp Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Photographer
Thank you:)
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:icontophxomi:
tophxomi Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconrezzanatakol:
RezzanATAKOL Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
Tebrikler sevgili Mehmet:)
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:iconm-eralp:
m-eralp Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Photographer
Çok teşekkürler:)
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The-Life-Of-Art Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
well this is quite amazing !!
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:iconm-eralp:
m-eralp Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Photographer
Thank you:)
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Erozja Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Congrats on DD! :heart: :la:
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:iconm-eralp:
m-eralp Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Photographer
Thank you:) :hug:
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Erozja Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
:hug:
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Banderoo Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Scary ^^ 
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leodemi23 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist
So pretty
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:iconm-eralp:
m-eralp Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Photographer
Thank you:)
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Contraltissimo Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
Oh wow.... that is just beautiful.... :heart:
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:iconm-eralp:
m-eralp Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Photographer
Thank you:)
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RogersPhotos Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student Photographer
:3
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wordeea Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
congratulations ! beautiful and well deserved !
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:iconm-eralp:
m-eralp Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Photographer
Many thanks:)
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Torozu Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing :D
what photography tips can you give??
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:iconm-eralp:
m-eralp Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Photographer
Thank you:) I think most important thing is taking loooots of photos:)
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Torozu Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :D
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Misted-Dream Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Fantastic atmosphere! Congrats on the DD too. :)
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:iconm-eralp:
m-eralp Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Photographer
Thanks so much:)
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Misted-Dream Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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wierdnun Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
so pretty
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:iconm-eralp:
m-eralp Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Photographer
Thank you:)
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Fluffy-Mage Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is a beautiful place to bury the body!~
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snowysylva Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The colors in this are beautiful. And, of course, the atmosphere. Lovely! 
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:iconm-eralp:
m-eralp Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Photographer
Thanks so much:)
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Babou-Shka Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
Great shot and atmosphere.
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:iconm-eralp:
m-eralp Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Photographer
Thank you:)
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Babou-Shka Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
You're welcome :)
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Devilndisguise Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Love it!
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m-eralp Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Photographer
Thanks:)
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JAStar4 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014   Writer
amazing work :)
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m-eralp Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014   Photographer
Thank you:)
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JAStar4 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014   Writer
you're welcome :)
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